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Why does my teacher want me ti replace you with anither word in this sentence? U onlt need to look at the last sentence

Why does my teacher want me ti replace you with anither word in this sentence? U onlt-example-1
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Answer and Explanation:

Since you are writing in third person, and I think not writing towards the reader in throughout, it would make sense to not address the reader now, since it would disrupt.

I'm not sure if you need to end with a question, but your sentence could look like this:

Anyone in Shauzia's positions wouldn't run away, even at the toughest of times. (You can reword it if you want)

#teamtrees #WAP (Water And Plant)

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