Question

Choose the sentence that includes a poorly placed modifier based on the context of the sentence.

• a) Characterized by descriptions of the natural world, Annie Dillard's writing pushes readers to see nature with new eyes.

• b By using a lot of descriptions of the natural world, Annie Dillard pushes readers to see nature with new eyes

• c) Annie Dillard's writing, characterized by descriptions of the natural world, pushes readers
to see nature with new eyes.

d) Characterized by descriptions of the natural world, Annie Dillard pushes readers to see
nature with new eyes.

Answer 1

B

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

Answer: b. By using a lot of descriptions of the natural world, Annie Dillard pushes readers to see nature with new eyes

Step-by-step explanation:

"B" is placed awkwardly and does not clearly modify the noun or verb it is intended to modify. This can cause confusion and can make the sentence difficult to understand. A better way to write this sentence would be: "Annie Dillard's writing, which is characterized by descriptions of the natural world, pushes readers to see nature with new eyes." This revision clarifies the relationship between the modifier and the noun it is intended to modify, making the sentence easier to understand.