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I NEED SOME BODY TO ANSWER THIS 55 PLZZ Narrative Writing: Removing Irrelevant Details below has one sentence that is not relevant to the narrative. Cross out that sentence to strengthen the paragraph.The attic door made a creepy, squeaking sound as I turned the rusty knob. I never go in the attic if I can help it, but my grandma broke her ankle and someone had to get the Thanksgiving decorations. The door cracked open, and a stale smell greeted me as I shued in, gripping my flashlight. It cast light upon various piles of old stu covered in dust and cobwebs. Where was the box Grandma had sent me up here for? I hate watching scary movies. I bumped my knee into what looked like an antique desk. Ouch! I stood up, rubbing my knee, and my distress retreated as I caught a glimpse of a faded cardboard box labeled "THANKSGIVING." Just what I needed! I grabbed the box and made a beeline for the door. I certainly wouldn't be returning to the attic any time soon.

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the answer is i hate watching scary movies. that sentence is irrelevant
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