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Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow
and writing style of a story?
A. Harold woke up, and he heard a noise, which was an owl hooting.
Harold heard it again, and it was the sound of an owl hooting.
Harold lay down in his sleeping bag, and he tried to sleep.
B. Harold woke up in his sleeping bag. He heard a noise outside the
tent. An owl hooted twice in a row. Harold heard the owl again one
more time. Harold lay down in his sleeping bag.
OC. Harold woke up. He heard a noise outside the tent: an owl hooting.
He heard it again. Frightened, Harold shrank down in his sleeping
bag and shivered.
OD. Harold woke up. He heard a noise. An owl hooted. Harold heard it
again. Harold lay down in his sleeping bag.

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Answer:

C. Harold woke up. He heard a noise outside the tent: an owl hooting.

He heard it again. Frightened, Harold shrank down in his sleeping

bag and shivered.

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