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Curtis is revising his argumentative essay. One sentence reads, "I believe that the Columbian Exchange was hard for the people of central Mexico.” Which phrase should Curtis remove to create a more formal tone?

“I believe that”
“hard for the people”
“of central Mexico”
“the Columbian Exchange”

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I believe that

Never include personal opinions in formal essays
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Answer:

" i believe that"

Step-by-step explanation:

using I always makes it seem less formal

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