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Choose the more poetic sentence of the pair of sentences.

I have a little shadow that goes in and out with me,
Where my shadow is depends on the sun.

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Answer: Where my shadow is depends on the sun.

Explanation: it feels more poetic becasue I feel you could go more in depth about it, for example "depends on the sun" could link to mood etc

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Answer:

I think the second sentence

Step-by-step explanation:

it feels more poetic becasue I feel you could go more in depth about it, for example "depends on the sun" could link to mood etc

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