Question

How should this sentence be changed?

The article about solar energy was both succinct and I thought it was relevant.
A. Delete about solar energy
B. Add as well after relevant
C. Delete I thought it was
D. No change needs to be made to this sentence

Answer 1

The sentence should be changed by deleting 'I thought it was' to make it more concise.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence should be changed by selecting option C, which is to delete 'I thought it was'. By removing this phrase, the sentence becomes more concise and eliminates the redundancy of stating both 'sucinct' and 'thought'. The revised sentence would then be:

'The article about solar energy was both succinct and relevant.'

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