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Does make sense:


She's caring, mature, and sharing.

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I can't remember what it's called, but there is a role when it comes to sentence structure. When making a list of adjective as you are, they should all have the same ending. So, you have caring and sharing ending in -ing. Try to rephrase the sentence to that the endings are all the same
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I would change "mature" to something ending in "ing" so that it flows better. Hoped this helped and contact me if you have any more questions

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