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Red line is the teacher feed back what should I write to fix it please help

Red line is the teacher feed back what should I write to fix it please help-example-1
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Answer:

Try giving some examples

Step-by-step explanation:

Giving example is a great way to help a reader connect to what you are talking about. Give some examples and that will surely help relate to the books.

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