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Which of these sentences adds vivid words to a narrative about the first day of school A) as I walked slowly toward the school, my knees shook and my stomach was strange. b) as I walked toward the building , my knees felt unsteady and stomach felt sick . C) as I trudged toward the school , my knees quivered and my stomach flipped . D) as I trudged toward the building , my knees and my stomach felt weird .

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C) as I trudged toward the school , my knees quivered and my stomach flipped

Having a more vivid image of what is it like the first day of school is achieved witht he quivering of the knees, and the trudged, walking slowly, almost like you don´t want to do it, the narrator here explains better and gives a better image of what is like to wake up early for the first time after a great summer.

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C. "Trudged", "Quivered" and "Flipped" are more evocative and descriptive words describing more visually the narrative of the first day of school.
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