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Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.

We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.

We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.

We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track

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We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.

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Answer:

The sentence that most need to be revised is:

We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there

Step-by-step explanation:

The author needs to add more information about the place (there) as well as He has done with the other examples.

A. in the blooming forest today.

B. in the stuffy high school gym.

D. around the track

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