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These sentences are too short and choppy; they need to be combined into one concise thought. Which sentence BEST

accomplishes this task without changing the writer's original meaning?
A) Paul Simon's song is very effective.
B) "Diamonds on the Soles of Her Shoes" is a very visual song.
C) I like that song because it creates a pretty picture in my head when I listen
to it.
D) Paul Simon's song "Diamonds on the Soles of Her Shoes" creates effective
visual imagery
D)

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Answer: I would say answer D.

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