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Fix any capitalization errors.

After Grandma McMillan gave me a telescope for my birthday, my Dad and I spent hours looking at Saturn and its amazing rings.

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Hey There!

I'll just rewrite it,

After Grandma McMillan gave me a telescope for my Birthday, my Dad and I spent hours looking at Saturn and its amazing rings.
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