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Whats a good title for this poem below:

A: my heart is gone
B: but I’m okay
A: it’ll only last today

A: or maybe all today or everyday
B: when you cry it’s like rain
A: you have to let out the pain,

A: but you will be fine today.
B: Turning love and joy to pain,
A: Hidden by the falling rain.

A: tragedy becomes the norm
B: When hate and fear begin to form.
A: Hurtful lies tear lives apart

A: And cause more harm to a heart.
B: Once the pain and hate begin,
A: Nothing is the same again.

A: Once the lie has been revealed
B: Secrets are no more concealed
A: Then the healing can undo
A: What he has done unto you.
A: Once the healing has begun,
B: Love and happiness have won.
A: With the truth, you can defeat.

User Coolbeet
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the lie
this is very good name it expresses the poem

User Poolie
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