Question

Can u correct my errors in this txt short I'm not English:

We have just watched a video; it is a scene from the movie “Falling down”. A man enters a fast-food restaurant to order breakfast. The waitress refuses him because the breakfasts are no longer served. She offers him lunch. The man gets angry and asks what she calls the manager. He comes in and tells him the same thing, that they stop serving breakfast at 11:30. It’s 11:31. They force him to have lunch, we do not take him into account. They do not ask him for his opinion. This lack of respect, even though he is a customer, that he will pay, drives him crazy. He pulls out a weapon. Everyone is scared! And he asks for breakfast again, the answer is "yes, sire." So, he changes his mind, and decides to choose lunch. He teases people because he made an attack in the fast food for his breakfast and now, he doesn’t want it.

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

"The man gets angry and asks that she calls the manager." "They force him to have lunch and do not take his feelings into account."

"This lack of respect, since he is a customer and will pay, drives him crazy!" "Everyone is scared and when he asks for breakfast again, the answer is "Yes sire""

I put it in quotes so you could just pick out those pieces. It's a little hard without context but this should clear up your writing a little bit. Seems like a neat video your watching and hopefully this helps!