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Which of the following sentences correctly creates a natural pause?

Maybe we should make a new plan … the car is not running.
Maybe we should make a new plan, the car is not running.
Maybe we should make a new plan, the car, is not running.
Maybe we should make a new plan: the car is not running.

User Jeffmayeur
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2nd one makes the most sense
User NWaters
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the second option "Maybe we should make a new plan, the car is not running"

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