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The first train took twenty-six minutes to complete the route, which ran from City Hall to West 145th Street "in under a half an hour."

Which of the following alternatives to the quoted portion would NOT be acceptable?

NO CHANGE
in the completion of its route.
in twenty-six minutes.
DELETE the quoted portion and end the sentence with a period.

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User Holgerm
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This option would be no change because if you don't change it the paragraph in itself would not make much sense.
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User Guillaume Berche
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No change  because the sentence is repeating its self but is just using different words. 
User Yezan Rafed
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