Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.

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Decltype · Answer 1 · 2018-10-21T18:56:49+0000

You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel.

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