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Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.
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Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.

Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.-example-1
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Yahhh what she said
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You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel. 
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