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Revise the following sentence so that it uses parallel structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

He is an amazing cook, makes great paintings, and he is a loyal friend.

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He is an amazing cook, is a great painter and is a loyal friend....

might be the correct answer.....
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The answer to the question above would be the following one: He is an amazing cook, a great painter and a loyal friend. As you can see, two phrases out of three are NPs (amazing cook, loyal friend) and the other one is a verb phrase (makes great paintings). Therefore, the best option would be for all the phrases to be NPs (amazing cook, loyal friend and great painter).

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