When revising the first draft, the writer should make sure that the content follows the thesis statement. Each paragraph of the body should support that pivotal sentence. The writer should ask if the content is in a logical sequence. Is the paper well-organized, making it an easy read?
Remove slang and jargon that the reader may not understand. Ensure that the content is coherent and that connections are made between sentences and paragraphs, making them parallel. Transitions should be used when introducing a new paragraph or idea.