Question

You write a paragraph containing all simple sentences your reader complains that the writing sounds overly child-like and choppy.

Which is the best method to add variety to the paragraph?
A. Add a couple more simple sentences.
B. Change the simple sentence to compound sentences.
C. Change the simple sentences to complex sentences.
D. Change some of the sentences to compound and complex sentences.

Answer 1

D is the correct answer. To spice up your writing, you've got to have a variety of different sentence types: simple, compound, and complex sentences.