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Sarah is writing an essay about the mountain-climbing culture at Mount Everest in Tibet and Nepal. While revising her first draft, she creates a reverse outline to double check that her paper has a logical flow. What is the most logical sequence for Sarah’s essay?

A)famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; facts about Mount Everest; the history of Tibet and Nepal; the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal

B)the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal; facts about Mount Everest; famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; the history of Tibet and Nepal

C) facts about Mount Everest; the history of Tibet and Nepal; famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal

D) the history of Tibet and Nepal; famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; facts about Mount Everest; the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal

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I would say that C is the right order of writing the passage. 
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D) the history of Tibet and Nepal; famous mountain climbers who have scaled Mount Everest; facts about Mount Everest; the effects of climbing culture on Tibet and Nepal
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