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What's the correct way to rewrite the following sentence? The shift tasted the soup taking a tiny sip.

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You could write an independent clause at the beginning like this:

Taking a tiny sip, the shift tasted the soup.
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Taking a tiny sip, the chef tasted the soup.
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