Question

Can you check my song i wrote and tell what need's to be done please tell me i wont be mad a song is due at 1:59

My tune: music is my happiness, but it is my escape to get away from the things that make me want to run away but you just watch what will happen, but you will say that I should just give up and fly away from everything and everyone yeah but that is not going to happen because this is not who I am, but I cannot fly no more because I cannot escape to a whole new world yeah, but it keeps me wondering if the sky is more rapid than the heart beating like thunder or why the rain feels like sad tears but I'm not giving up soon yeah that’s not how I work yeah I bring life and joy to other people I meet yeah if that’s not who I am who am I and what did I do to run away from this big world I can't control what people do or what people say so why am I talking, I should just keep my mouth closed so I don’t get dragged down from all the haters who just wish I went away yeah.

Answer 1

I really like it! keep working, and ask family to!

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