Does this poem sound cheesy? Is there anything I should change?
My imaginary friend
Makes me feel so grand.
She always smiles,
she gives me great advice.
She knows everything I like
There's no one I would want to be with,
than with my brand new friend.
She'll be there when I'm sad.
If I'm already happy, is
she'll find a way to make me happier.
I love my friend
And she loves me
And we'll always support each other,
Until the very end.