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Which sentence needs to be rewritten?

A) The bus driver pulled up to Virginia's home and let her out with a friendly wave.

B) Mrs. Martin had done many jobs in her life, but she loved being a schoolbus driver the best.

C) Caroline's mother was waiting at the end of the sidewalk for her daughter to be let off the bus.

D) After the school day ended, Abby got on the bus that afternoon to go to her afternoon soccer club.

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Answer:

The answer is D

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A. is a little improperly written but D is bad to there is an improper connection between school then going soccer
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