Question

Read the sentence from a sample cover letter Why did the tax auditor cross the road?

I did it to catch the thief. But seriously, I have a Master's degree in Finance and have worked as a tax auditor for ten years.
What is the weakness in this sentence?
A. It attempts to be humorous.
B. It provides irrelevant information.
C. It understates the candidate's qualifications.
D. It overstates the candidate's qualifications.

Answer 1

I would have to say that it would be between letter choice A) and B) but I'd have to say that A) is the most logical explanation.

Hope I was able to help, ~Kashout kam.

Answer 2

The weakness in the sentence is the following one:

A. It attempts to be humorous.

Step-by-step explanation:

It is a cover letter, and as so it is supposed and expected to have a serious, formal tone, since it has to do with work. Trying to be funny on a cover letter is as inappropriate as bursting out laughing at a funeral service. A cover letter is an introduction to someone's CV, and it is sent with other documents that prove one's qualifications. Therefore, attempting to be humorous on a cover letter sounds naive and childish, and whoever writes a cover letter wants to be taken seriously.