Question

What sounds better? "Mrs. Stevenson is a disrespectful and impatient character and because of her nasty personality she caused her own murder." or "Mrs. Stevenson is a disrespectful, impatient character and because of her nasty personality she caused her own murder."

Answer 1

Choice two sounds better.

Answer 2

The second choices use of commas is better and appeals to a reader. It rolls more smoothly and promotes a pause and a chance to think.

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