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Is this a good thesis statement? Please look at it and help me out! Will give the brain!!!!

All children should be required to have health insurance, because a child with no health insurance might go without the medication he/she needs to survive, children with no health insurance have a high risk of getting sick and not getting medical attention if needed, and children with no health insurance are at a greater risk of not seeing a doctor.

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This is really good. All you need to know is support your answer all you can.

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I think that it's good.

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