Question

I need help, I'm not sure how to put the "error sentence" in a question.

Answer 1

"The actors in this play try to portray sorrow, they try to depict an empty world which surprises me."

I believe it should say:

"The actors in this play try to portray sorrow; they try to depict an empty world which surprises me."

I tried :P

Hope this helps!

Answer 2

Hello!
You would say, “is this sentence an error sentence?”
Hope this helps!