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In 3–5 sentences, discuss how social media influences a teenager’s self-esteem.

How social media changes almost everything about them from their moods, attitude, and character. They continuously look in the mirror and want to look like someone who has had plastic surgery. They will go on a diet and start to workout so they get a good body and so they can also impress someone else this goes for both guys and girls. People think they can make the perfect teenager and when you can't, it's up to the teen to choose who they want to be some give up and go down dark roads other strive to me their parents happy and along the teen is a little happy but not all the time.
This is what i put for mine is this ok?

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VERY good

I like the intro you wrote maybe add another sentence that is stronger for the last sentence

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