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Select one of the following topic sentences (1, 2, 3, 4, or 5) and write a paragraph that develops this topic. end the paragraph with a clinching sentence that refers to and repeats the idea (but does not use the same words) of the topic sentence.

1. My favorite food is ____
2. I cannot concentrate when ____
3. Sports are overemphasized in school and should be eliminated.
4. Sports are necessary for a good education.
5. The problem I would try to solve first if I were President is ____.

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Answer:

I cannot concentrate when...

Step-by-step explanation:

I cannot concentrate when there's too much noise around. I don't exactly know why but it just blurs my head and it's impossible to do anything, anyways, I've tried to work this issue because i'm totally aware that sometimes it's impossible to isolate from the world or find a place completely in silence, so, even though i like libraries a lot, i think i should start to read or study in some noisy places, that way i could start to get used to the fact that i should be able to concentrate anywhere. But, actually, if i could, i would totally create a secret place where a could go and just do what i needed, and then came back to reality, and where no sound could be heard.

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Example(please use your own words.) :

My favorite food is pizza(< topic sentence) because it's cheesy, and I love how the cheese tastes with the sauce. My family also likes this food, We eat it together for dinner almost every night. I don't eat it everyday since it's not "healthy", but sometimes me and my older sister order some pizza secretly and eat it in the park in back of my house. If you can't tell, I'm obsessed with this food. If I ruled over the world, I would make my country out of pizza.

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