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Does this semicolon work in this statement?

“By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”

also if there is anything on there you would change that would help a lot :)

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User Exhausted
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Answer: The word because is a linking word and the semicolon isn't appropriate where there is a link So no the semicolon won't work :)

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