Question

I love to take my dogs to the park. I make sure to bring fresh water their leashes and extra treats whenever we go. My dogs are a lot bigger than most dogs so I have to make sure the park is not too crowded when we go. My dogs get really excited when they see other dogs and they bark so loud. Sometimes people get worried when they hear my dogs bark but they are really friendly and just want to play. After a long walk to the park my dogs usually sleep for an hour.

Rewrite the paragraph to use the correct punctuation.

Answer 1

I love to take my dogs to the park. I make sure to bring fresh water, their leashes, and extra treats whenever we go. My dogs are a lot bigger than most dogs, so I have to make sure the park is not too crowded when we go. My dogs get really excited when they see other dogs and they bark so loud. Sometimes, people get worried when they hear my dogs bark, but they are really friendly and just want to play. After a long walk to the park, my dogs usually sleep for an hour.

Answer 2

I love to take my dogs to the park. I make sure to bring fresh water their leashes and extra treats whenever we go. My dogs are a lot bigger than most dogs so, I have to make sure the park is not too crowded when we go. My dogs get excited when they see other dogs and they bark so loud. Sometimes, people get worried when they hear my dog bark but they are friendly and just want to play. After a long walk to the park, my dogs usually sleep for an hour.