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Read the sentence.

During the pizza party, Mrs. Saint-Claire served the children on paper plates.

What is the best way to revise this sentence?
Served on paper plates, Mrs. Saint-Claire during the party gave pizza to the children.
Mrs. Saint-Claire, during the pizza party, served the children on paper plates.
During the party, Mrs. Saint-Claire served pizza on paper plates to the children.
The sentence is correct as written

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The answer - During the party, Mrs. Saint-Claire served pizza on paper plates to the children
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Answer:

Mrs.Saint-Claire served the children on paper plates during the pizza party

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