Question

Which sentence would be inappropriate in an informational piece of writing with a formal tone? The loggerhead sea turtle is one marine species that is listed under the Endangered Species Act. Loggerhead sea turtles are the most common sea turtle in the southeastern United States. People need to stop throwing trash in the water and and keep away from the nests of these cute creatures or they won't survive. These turtles face many threats in our seas, from getting caught in fishing nets, being hit by ships, and ingesting plastic debris.

Answer 1

People need to stop throwing trash in the water and keep away from the nests of these cute creatures or they won't survive.

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Answer 2

People need to stop throwing trash in the water and keep away from the nests of these cute creatures or they won't survive.

Step-by-step explanation:

The tone a certain text is written in refers to the type of words and writing style the author uses relay their attitude towards a topic discussed in the said text.

The formal tone is used in texts of business, legal, academic, or professional nature. The opposite of formal is the informal tone, which is more personal and emotional. Most of the listed examples are informative, scientific, as they give us information about the loggerhead sea turtle. All examples, except for People need to stop throwing trash in the water and keep away from the nests of these cute creatures or they won't survive, are neutral and objectively convey information, while in the said example of informal tone we can feel the author's emotions.