Answer:
This response has weak claims, lack of reasoning and organization, and is not very clear. The claims are misleading and confusing, because of this, the reasoning is not good and doesn't contribute to the overall statement. Transitional phrases are not used which causes the statement to be harder to understand.
Step-by-step explanation:
not sure what its talking about, I would change the words "statement" and "response" to whatever it is that these bullet points are about. :)