Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow
and writing style of a story?
A. Dante picked up his trading cards. He slid each one into the
binder, Mariah had finally traded him a Silver Knight. He smiled to
himself. She had asked for six cards in return. It was worth it.
O B. Smiling to himself, Dante picked up his trading cards, and he slid
each one into the binder. When Mariah had finally traded him a
Silver Knight, she had asked for six cards in return, but it was
worth it.
O C. Smiling to himself, Dante picked up his trading cards. He slid each
one into the binder. Mariah had finally traded him a Silver Knight.
She had asked for six cards in return, but it was worth it.
D. Dante picked up his trading cards, and he slid each one into the
binder. Mariah had finally traded him a Silver Knight, so he smiled
to himself. She had asked for six cards in return, but it was worth
it.