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This September I went to San Antonio Texas to see my sister graduate MEPS, on our way there it was scary because we drove in the middle of tornado season, And we were driving through a storm later i found out we were actually driving through a tornado, There were branches frying all over the place! Our car was moving insanely, there was so much rain and thunder.
When we had made it to our hotel I had searched it up and realized there was a tornado where we were driving.
Next morning we went to see my sister, she was in her air-force uniform, She was very professional and boring.
The next day after that she graduated MEPS.
We decided to go get a giant cinnamon roll

Answer 1

This September I went to San Antonio Texas to see my sister graduate MEPS, on our way there it was scary because we drove in the middle of tornado season, And we were driving through a storm later I found out we were driving through a tornado. Branches were flying all over the place! Our car was moving insanely, there were so much rain and thunder.

When we had made it to our hotel I had searched it up and realized there was a tornado where we were driving.

Next morning we went to see my sister, she was in her air-force uniform, She was very professional and boring.

The next day after that she graduated MEPS.

We decided to go get a giant cinnamon roll.

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

This September, I went to San Antonio, Texas to see my sister graduate MEPS. On our way there it was scary because we drove in the middle of tornado season. Also, we were driving through a storm. Later, I found out that we were actually driving through a tornado. There were branches flying all over the place! Our car was moving tumultuously, there was so much rain and thunder.


When we had made it to our hotel I searched the Web and realized that there was a tornado where we were driving.

Next morning we went to see my sister. She was in her Air Force uniform. She was very professional and boring.

The next day, she graduated MEPS!

We decided to go get a giant cinnamon roll.