Answer:
Rewrite it in a way in which they do not die by their own individual hand. He was mistaken and then made a rash decision to die, but if he would have just waited he would know that the lioness did not do the deadly deed.
Step-by-step explanation:
This is another type of romeo and juliet. they whisper through the walls how much they love each other, but their parents forbid them to be together. It is love forever or die together. Reword it so that they can live happily ever after.