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Selena wants to add variety to her narrative by combining sentences. How should she combine sentences 10 and 11 to highlight the differences between Kate and her?

#10. She loved being outdoors.
#11. I preferred being inside with thr air conditioning blowing.

A. She loved being outdoors, I preferred being inside with the air conditioning blowing.

B. She loved being outdoors; therefore, I preferred being inside with the air conditioning blowing.

C. She loved being outdoors while I preferred being inside with the air conditioning blowing.

D. She loved being outdoors because I preferred being inside with the air conditioning blowing.

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I would say C because it uses a transition word correctly.

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C. She loved being outdoors while I preferred being inside with the air conditioning blowing

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