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Can someone please help me if this setence makes since if not fix it please and thank u

My experience with a professional hairstylist, she greeted me at the door and asked what I needed help with. I-myself, asked if they could cut or style my hair in a particular way, in which she said yes. Then leaded me to where I needed to go to get my hair done, such as the hair washing station. Also made sure the hair cut correctly as they separated and divided my hair to get it cut evenly, it was a good service.​

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"Upon my experience with a professional hairstylist, I was greeted at the door and asked what I needed for my visit. i had asked the professional hairstylist if she was able to cut and style my hair in a certain way, where she had replied that she could. I was then lead to the hair washing station to wash my hair, then to the hairstylist chair for it to be cut and styled. The professional hairstylist had used special techniques to separate my hair in sections to cut it evenly and styled. Overall, it was a good service and I was pleased with it."