Here’s some to get you started
Error...Correction
“New”... knew”
“Two day”... day two
“Sure”... sure,
“Nerves”... nervous,
“Her”... H shouldn’t be capitalized
“Meat”... meet
“Will”... would
“All eyes turned to Sarah she felt her”... there should be a period between Sarah and she
“Tern”... turn
“We’re”... were
“She” the S should be a lower case