Question

Rewrite the following sentence that removes the passive voice and adds clarity. Sentence: Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.

Answer 1

The desert road scoffs at my concerns in providing my enemy with a valuable avenue of approach.

Step-by-step explanation:

The passive voice is a construction of sentences. This construction provides a structure where the direct object of a sentence is positioned as the subject of the sentence. Thus, the verb is fully expressed in relation to the subject of the sentence, suffering action directly.