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The tone of the essay is too informal and casual." Is this feedback for a large-scale revision or a small-scale revision?

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Answer:

Large-scale revision.

Step-by-step explanation:

To redo the tone of the essay is to basically erase the essay, then rewriting it. The tone is intertwined with the essay.

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