The tone of the essay is too informal and casual." Is this feedback for a large-scale revision or a small-scale revision?

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asked Apr 8, 2021 165k views

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Alex Blackwood · Answer 1 · 2021-04-15T10:05:36+0000

Answer:

Large-scale revision.

Step-by-step explanation:

To redo the tone of the essay is to basically erase the essay, then rewriting it. The tone is intertwined with the essay.