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IS THIS SUFFICIENT ENOUGH TO APOLOGIZE TO SOMEONE THAT I TARGETED THEM? TELL ME WHAT I CAN DO TO IMPROVE

Hi teacher,
I'm sorry about today's attendance question response. It wasn't supposed to be targeted at you but to my brother who usually corrects me a lot. You're a really funny and nice teacher, so I don't think that you correcting my grammar will be a problem.

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It has a great based, yet we want it to be more formal. A good example would be “Hello “teacher”,
I do apologies for my response in today’s attendance question response. It was not to be targeted towards you, but to my brother who has a tendency to correct me a lot. I appreciate you as a teacher and I have no issue with you correcting me on proper grammar usage.”
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