Question

Prompt: why is it necessary to take chances

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Taking a risk to achieve a goal requires courage to face the fear of uncertainty. No matter the outcome we learn, and become more confident. Building these skills helps in taking more risks and improves the chances of a future goal. If you don’t take the chance it’s a chance wasted.

Brian Tracy once said “i've found that luck is quite predictable if you want more luck, take more chances…” learning from this you can see the more chances you take the higher luck you will have. An example of this would be if you decide to play an instrument, one day you could become very talented and maybe famous. You could even decide to play a sport, then have good colleges ask you to be on their team.

We all feel regret, but we don’t need to regret everything because we didn’t take a chance. Would you like to live life for you or for other people? Don’t follow the crowd and stand out, taking chances makes us who we are. If you want to take a job as a photographer but everyone around you says to not to, if you really want to do it take a chance and do it. You could become a famous photographer that all celebrities want. Taking chances is the whole point of life. That’s what makes you you.


Taking a chance is something you can’t think about. But it’s always necessary to take a chance at some point in life. Chances are the one thing that is unlimited so remember, taking chances are always necessary.

I’m a 9th grade is this acceptable? If not please help to improve it

Thank you!

Answer 1

well, it necesary for you to be able and to prove that you deserve a another chance

Answer 2

First of all you have some capitalization errors. I would suggest you turn An example of this would be if you decide to play an instrument, one day you could become very talented and maybe famous to An example of this would be deciding to play an instrument. If you keep practicing (change the word practicing if you wish) you can become successful. . Just try to remove informal words to make it more formal. Other than that I would think its acceptable for a 9th grade essay.

Good luck hope you get a good grade :)