Question

What do you think would have made the essay more effective and why? Your answer should be 3 to 4 sentences.

Answer 1

some ideas!! (use whichever you think could apply)
- stronger evidence
- more sources
- differing viewpoints (to argue against)
- more impactful introduction
- more impactful conclusion
- better use of mechanics (transition words, language, etc)
tip: look at the rubric for the essay and write about standards that you maybe could have improved on (:

Answer 2

Thinks that made an essay more effective are follows

I) Tittle (the more interesting the tittle is, the more it would create an impact on reader to read it)

ii) uses of quotes and phrases in essay ( it makes an essay more creative )

iii) uses of simple language rather than using very hard words ( it helps the reader to understand easily )

iv) Creativity