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Read this paragraph from a narrative.

The woods were dark and silent. Not even the sound of a bird disturbed the quiet. I stepped on a twig, and the sound echoed off the trees. Cautiously, I asked Manuel if he was sure about this trip.

Which sentence could be improved by adding dialogue?
A. “The woods were dark and silent.”
B. “Not even the sound of a bird disturbed the quiet.”
C. “I stepped on a twig, and the sound echoed off the trees.”
D. “Cautiously, I asked Manuel if he was sure about this trip.”

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Answer:

The woods are dark and silent

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